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That good man

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 He trys and trys time and time again, to be

the one you want, that strong good man.

He trys  and trys but no matter what he do,

it's still never freakin good enough for you.

Working 1 job and sometimes 2, This "Broke down bum" as you like to call him, 

is waking up at 5 in the morning to go work his a$$ off for you.

When he get's home from work no " Hi honey how are you",

But instead in 2.3 seconds your in his face trying to argue.

He works all day, He just wants to come home to a home cooked meal,

But all you can say is " I have been watching the kids all day

dont you know how i feel?

No rest from the day, even tho it's been long, You still in his face

singing that same song, 

" I know you been cheating on me with some girl, and dont lie

to me i found out from the homie earl.

He trys to tell you nothing is going on, But you just 

point your finger in his face and tell him he's wrong.

Always complaining, " You never want to hang out with me,

only with your boys, Runing around all over town your favorite spot,

yeah that place right next to roy's.

You nag and nag  until he goes to bed " Why do i even deal with this, 

He must be thinking in his head.

No matter what he does good or bad, You always have

a problem with him and that's just sad.

The moral of this story ladies is to treat that good man right,

Just be gentel and kind to him, You dont always have to fight.

Now i am not talking about those " So called good men" I'm talking

about those real one's who long for a good queen to hold his hand.

Ladies there are good men out there, Some may be far, Some maybe near,

But acting ghetto and acting 12 years old, Is'nt going to keep him there.

So ladies when you find a good man, Just show him love and 

compassion and do all you can, Cus finding a honest good man is not

always easy to land.

 

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bulldognation44267 says:

Real, straight up real.

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