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CAN I GET IT???

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If I want it …
Can I get it?
If I want it…
Will she let me?
But once I got it…
Do I still want it?
If she let’s me…?
What else can I get?
Will I keep it ?
Can I improve it?
Does she want it?
Just cuz she let’s me…
Now that I got it…
Why am I still sweating?
Gambling she can keep me…
I bet I can get it again?
On to the next getting…
Already forgotten that I can get it…
How could I, she gave it to me?
Is she happy that she gave it?
Or has she given up on getting back?
Retracing getting what was gotten…
Did I waste what I had?
Will she want to go back?
Before I got it, I did want it????
Now I got to fight for what is given….
I remember when I had that….
Now all I got is the question….
Why didn’t I keep it?

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miss_chaniel says:

so is she worth fighting for ???
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tretre says:

Yet another wonderful poem. I was thinking the same thing as Miss_Chaniel, Is she worth fighting for? Keep that pen movin!
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks miss_chaniel

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NternallyMe says:

Isn't that the way of life? We want, we get, we lose, we want.. or do we? Another thought provoking poem.. Sweet! Chea

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2b2b2 says:

So true....the "wants" are seasonal/situational.....thanks for cheking me....ONE
 

LP45 says:

Excellent write 2b. Let keep that ink flowing.

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