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lightness in the dark
Love First and Love Lasts

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Outside Love

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Glimpse causes a gasp as I pass
Apple eyed high on lists derived
You persist to insist I’m that one
Planning my life, vicariously wishing
Slipping into dreams of fancy, antsy
Based on your midnight’ fantasy
Dancing in your eyes loving expectation

Begging for entry inside, with a smile
Beguile as your grin, belies insistence
I see in your eyes, this very same admission
Playing out our lives based on my submission
Renditions of happy ever after conquest is over
Assuming the love of a frame will sustain
Willing to maintain false existence at all cost
Long as that look and those looks can be retained

Forced to look in, to really find the mystique outside
Surprised by the shade, cobwebs and shadow....inside
Finding your self in the losing battle to faulty facades
Left wondering how, what, when and why?
You thought, but stopped thinking when you assumed
the prize…….
Solely comes from Loving the Outside…….????

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The Immortal Wize says:

very nice!

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2b2b2 says:

Thanks (winks)

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SensationThePoet says:

loved it.
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2b2b2 says:

I appreciate the feedback, SensationThePoet, thank you!

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