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Conveying Deception

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Love to me is simply overrated

I guess that's why I've grown to hate it

it's something that aggravates  me

though some would debate me

love educated me

I needed more than just stimulation

Love caused me a lot of frustration

brought drama to too many situations

held back many conversations

pushed so many knives in this back of mines

I look like a porcupine

this kind I speak of   is not love sublime

love lines is how love lied

slit open me wide stripped of all pride

yes I cried  smoke in my eyes yes I lied

my broken heart  panged like broken bones

hurt burned like passing kidney stones

driven into a corridor left alone

for my wounds to heal it took long

love to me is like kryptonite to superman

makes me weak in the knees I can not stand

these three words you must conceal

because of the way they make me feel

I can't take  it  seriously  it  always left me deliriously

believe me  I'm for real if  you  love me conceal it from me

Love is something not made for me

I have no faith in it like make believe

I tried it I applied it rubbed it on me

it left a rash all over me flaring up my allergies

left me with a sneeze and a wheeze

please don't ever say theses three words to me

it was those three  words that  tore me apart

it was those three  words that  scarred my heart 

  

 

  

 

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mrmelody7 says:

Lots going on here and I hear loud and clear as the song says Love is a real motha for you
 

NternallyMe says:

The pains of love is always worth it in the end.. I enjoyed this poem tremendously.. I found myself smiling while reading it.. Thanks for sharing.. In my book, you're a very good poet. Chea

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