The Immortal Wize  | Poetry Vibe
The Immortal Wize

PRO MEMBER

This poet practices good karma and posts comments 448100
contest winner 16
contest winner
lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

Site Rank

DIAMOND

  4 star general
Total poems   3343
Lifetime Views   747522
Total poems - 7 days   6
Total poems - 30 days   15
Total poems - 90 days   37
Total poems - 365 days   197
you need to login or register to leave a comment

Dibble Dabble

CATEGORY

just different

Poetry Vibe Mayor

MAYOR of Poetry Vibe. This poet is identified as the mayor of the Vibe for have the most karma ponts. You receive karma points when you comment on poems.

Views: 352

paint on my pants ink on my hands

 drugs are bad dope is good

scrawled on a wall in Hollywood

you can’t take no more, what are you giving

you say you’re Christian how are you living

I don’t like you you’re too old

your eyes are empty your soul’s cold

my lights are off my doors closed

making beats to the sound of the streets

murder mayhem no sir yes ma’am

oh boy body slam fight club no love

bear fist no glove Immortal no blood

white collar ring around the tub

too fresh rub a dub, dub

14 karat on clasp put away the claps

up in here we snap like lunatics

on acoustic instilments

the blocks in limbo the earth just moved

this is what had happened, pricked my finger

on a hatpin hand me a napkin

I feel a tremble in my thimble

 where did I write that pin code

I’m going through some things

racking my brains wondering could it be  my zip code

what’s the password I forgot my password

what was the last word

was it a subject, predicate or a verb

numbers or symbols I don’t remember

give me a hint I’m getting perturb

can’t feel the effects of the herb

I can still feel what’s getting my nerves

It’s an emergency I’m about to break glass

kick some ask not want not I see inkblots

tiny red microdots all over me like chicken pox

so damn mad I’m throwing rocks

I broke my watch can’t tell time

what to do the eye is watching you

It’s watching me too I might sound

a little paranoid but there are some

thing I must avoid thing that are

annoying Like hemorrhoids on steroids

how many words rhyme with scrabble

that’s right its _ _ _ _ _ _   _ _ _ _ _ _

 

You must be registered to leave a comment. Registration is FREE.

Register

COMMENTS

Contest Winner  

KingQadarDwon' says:

Very nice! Greatveirk
Contest Winner  

KingQadarDwon' says:

Very nice! Great work
Contest Winner  

hymnagen says:

Wize Dom, the wordplay slayer! My head bounced to this flow fo' real!
 

LP45 says:

Awesome write wizedom. Keep that ink flowing!

poems by this commentor


login below

Forgot your username?