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odonko-ba
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Her beauty isn't measured by some European standard of what beauty should be but by her confidence and the fact that she is loving the skin she's in. To me, that alone is beautiful.

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shattered dreams

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life

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 constantly

 trying to stay alive 

 survive

 a time bomb 

 waiting to explode

 a nuclear holocaust

world war three

in search of a rainbow in the sky

a piece of the amerikkkan pie

fishing my soul for the answer to my dreams

i realize 

i've been living a lie

i awake in a cold sweat surrounded

by variant mentalities and bars

confronted by 

shattered dreams

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COMMENTS

 

T'ya says:

U have an intricate and unique way of conveying ur thoughts in poetic form. U make the reader read and reread ur words just to absorb the feeling. Very nice
 

T'ya says:

U have an intricate and unique way of conveying ur thoughts in poetic form. U make the reader read and reread ur words just to absorb the feeling. Very nice
 

odonko-ba says:

Thank you very much im glad you enjoyed

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