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life 1 min read 640 views Oct 15, 2013

What's on your mind?

 What's on your mind?, something you're desperately trying to hide, something you never thought I'd find out, the reason you really say you need a time out, has another man taken your hand, or worse taken the love that I thought  belong to me, what's on your mind?, you seem nervous, avoiding me on purpose, lately it seems we're so out of sync, is it because of the guilt you're feeling?, is there something you need to tell me? Whats on your mind?, if its secrets you're trying so hard to conceal, I hope you're aware that your conscious can kill, what's on your mind? or should I say in your dreams,  last night in your sleep I couldn't help but hear you speak a name that didn't belong to me, what's on your mind?, maybe you wonder why I ask questions I already know the answers to, or why I never made good on my promise to be a better man for you, maybe you still think about my old cheating days,  and you figure its time I pay, and I realize by the time I figure out what's on your mind, its already too late...

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The Immortal Wize

Woa! this is deeply mastered, I love the ending.

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Superb Work....Word Up....ONE

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