Bang!!! Silver streaks soars,
Thud, I'm hit. Sirens go off.
People all around, but no one
around me. Wait, here comes someone.
No! No! Don't.
Silence nothing around.
Bright blinding light someone help
Being sucked into nothing.........
tretre
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THE BIG BANG
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DreamPoet says: This is great. If i am correct this poem is about, Someone being shot and dieing going into the light correct? This is great short but sweet. Great job tretre. |
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2b2b2 says: Well Played Petite Piece....Bravo |
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