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c_michelle_b
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Lively Death

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 The life of the party but your heart is numb

Empty

Judging the one who looks no fun

Envy

it looks so enticing on the outside

Tempting

To busy trying to be what you're not

Blending

Blurring your vision you can't see the truth

Blinding

The same poison that's killing out youth

Untimely

But they make look so enjoyable

Enticing

Party of loners faking smiles pretending to be

Lively

The could be lovely

Trying to rise above

Earn their stripes, tiger cub

But their to busy in the club

Your hearts pumping in your chest

You're set apart from the rest

When its too late it will all be over

There's no such thing as a lively death.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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TamaraD says:

VERY NICE I REALLY LIKE IT
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c_michelle_b says:

Thank u :)
 

xclusive says:

Wow... this was well put together. I like the structure on this one and how you ended it. Keep it up
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c_michelle_b says:

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback :)

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