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The Nerve

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What gives you the audacity to be so beautiful? Yes, you with a rainbow for a smile, with dreams hung upon the stars for eyes. Who told you, you could breath? What corrupted the air from your lungs, to vibrate against your harp string voice box and produce such inappropriate words, like 'hi'

Do you know of the joy such words can bring to a guy like me. I could feel the caterpillars in my stomach metamorph into the butterflies they were meant to be. The oxygen in my chest could not be contained, so excuse me for my long reply, its just difficult to speak without any air in your lungs. Who dared you to walk? I have never seen an angel on her feet, which is why I wonder...what did the ground do to deserve such honour? Does God know you're down here? What cursed you to walk among common man? You with Alzheimer's for a face, I get lost for words every time I look at you. The earth does not deserve such beauty. Are you sure this is where you're suppose to be? What gives you the audacity to be so beautiful? and what gives me the brass to love you?.

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The Immortal Wize says:

very smooth lines.

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2b2b2 says:

Superbly played.....ha ha.....Bravo
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mzsopriceless says:

Beautiful.

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