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lightness in the dark
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Falling Down

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Why beat against this wall it
Won’t fall
 

Standing before this wall crying
Pleading, begging and groveling
 

Beating this wall that won’t fall
 

Screaming at it rage in hand
It won’t fall
 

I did everything to this wall
For it to fall
 

I even tried reasoning with
The wall that won’t fall
 

In time it will
Fall it will
 

Sadly enough I won’t
Be here to see it go down
 

One day I will rise up and
Find out the wall is gone
 

Out of sight
Never out of mind
 

Leaving me standing crushed
From the impact
 

Nothing left to lean against
 

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catmartan says:

Deep!!!

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c_michelle_b says:

This is amazing :)

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royale jones says:

Man! I love the symbolism of the story. Great piece.

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