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lies

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Im hurt their is no way around that truth 

Im mad at myself i shouldve known better then to trust u

To do the right thing

How dare you clain to be a man u don't know the first thing

I threw those emotions out the door

Thats right cuz love. certainly doesnt live here anymore

What happen to loyalty staying true to those whi had you back

Cuz truth be told the way you handled things was wack

But i was stupid for expecting any different 

White make and a red nose is all ur missing

Youre a clown no rythm scheme no punches

Ill smoke this pain away pass me some sour n dutches

Last thing i need is another fake person around me

Kick rocks with ssandals on till yo feet bleed

Lies on top of lies i dried your eyes

When those others left you to die i gave u life

Showed you i cared i got nothing to show for 7 years wasted

I bet them hoes happy now they always said u was fakin

Theres no hurt worse then betrayal

Trust me i lliv. To tell the tale

And aint no happy endings here

i just wish all this hurt would disappear

Some one help me

 

 

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jevans1194 says:

Well written....And deep I love it!
 

sensationthepoet says:

a little slow, deep!
 

sensationthepoet says:

a love the flow, deep!
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The Immortal Wize says:

This is deep, sensation are you okay? lmao!!

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BeEva says:

Emtional. Very well expressed.

 

BeEva says:

Emotional. Very well expressed.

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