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The Immortal Wize

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Split Ends (From the Lost Pages of Wize)

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He wanted to be a criminal when he grew up
He soon grew up and reached his goal
He’s been locked up since he was 12 years old
He has nothing but time on his hands though
He often speaks of having a plan it won’t fly
I’ll tell you why because, he’s not free the
Freest he has ever been was tucked away
In his mothers womb snuggled up to his twin
Now he’s huddling with other men because
He took his cues from the wrong men
Did he really have a chance? Ask his twin
 

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xclusive says:

sounds like the story going up in the hood. All about choice. Dope pen
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c_michelle_b says:

Great write :)

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2b2b2 says:

Awesome....well played

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DallasCowgirl says:

Captivating. Real. Deep. Thought provoking. Altogether well written. #muchrespect

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KingQadarDwon' says:

Great scribe. Thanks for sharing.
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Dope flow!

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