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SoFloetic
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lightness in the dark
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Trapped

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They say that sunshine comes in the morning

But the morning seems to never come for me

My days are lonely, my nights are gloomy i'm trapped in a world that I can't escape

Having dreams of a brighter day

But every day... .It remains the same I'm in desperate need of a change

But I'm trapped in a room with no way out so I SCREAM and I SCREAM and I JUMP and I SHOUT

CAN ANYBODY HEAR ME IS ANYBODY LISTENING

These four walls are closing in on me and I can't breathe

SOMEBODY PLEASE COME SAVE ME

But no one comes, no one ever hears my cries, no one feels my pain so every day it remains the same

And I'm starting to feel like I can't breathe I gasp for air but the oxygen is gone so I close my eyes and I begin to float home

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Majestic says:

Very powerful and excellently articulated in my opinion :) many a day I have felt this way too. God bless you

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Number3 says:

beautifully writte, so floetic, your poetry speaks and is a way out...good write, Word Up
 

royale jones says:

wow! that was pleasantly emotional greatm write Miss

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skb74# says:

WOW!
 

Tru Sista says:

I Can compare great write

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