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Let Go And Let God

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 To survive in this world, you've got to be tough,

Don't let anyone know when times get rough;

I grew up believing these things I was taught,

I thought t hey were right, but learned they were not.

My life was a mess by the time I was grown,

Things could have been different if only I'd known;

Trying to figure out which way to turn.

So each day passed,it seemed harder to do,

Looking for a crutch to make my way through;

I tried all the escapes, the ranges so broad,

But found only one, "Let go and let God."

It's still hard sometimes not to do things my way,

To take control  and not bother to pray;

So when things get too impossible to bear,

I have to remember that God is always there.

 

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2b2b2 says:

AWESOME....Heartfelt Share.....ONE

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tretre says:

Thank you 2b2b2.....Glad you liked it. Thanks for always showin love. Keep that pen movin 2b2b2!

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The Immortal Wize says:

When I'm in need of inspiration I often reach back for that handed down wisdom, when faith was over flowing...this awesome poem sais it all.

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Kavindra says:

very inspirational! It painted a vivid picture of hard times and gave the reader a wonderful solution.

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