Impressions of a mime
Alters the identification
Leaves a story without a line, and
Hides the true revelation
Confused...I draw a "X"
And, somehow
This led me to my destination
A desolated land
Of no true connection
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love_supreme says: Wow, this is a very powerful poem. |
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SoFloetic says: Wonderful |
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danielleangie3 says: Thank you :) |
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The Immortal Wize says: WOW!!! |
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danielleangie3 says: Thanks :) |
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Belindathapoet says: Nice!!! |
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stud_)trou8le says: I like how u worded this |
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LP45 says: Deep, very deep. Very nice congrats on your victory. |
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LP45 says: Deep, very deep. Very nice and congrats on your victory. |
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skyyberry1987 says: congrats!! |
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danielleangie3 says: Thank you everyone, I appreciate your comments :) |
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2b2b2 says: Superb....congratulation.....ONE |
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