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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I do not see me looking at you
 

Other tell me that I do
 

I see you too
 

You don’t think I do
 

I do notice you
 

Noticing me
 

I know you see me watching you
 

If my eyes shot flames
 

Across the room
 

You would be treated for
 

Third degree burns
 

In conversation my words are few
 

I struggle with the feelings
 

That I feel for you
 

Like they’ll hurt you
 

If I let them loose
 

I’m just not ready to call
 

A truce
 

Still I'm gone keep my eyes on you

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c_michelle_b says:

<3

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royale Jones says:

Great depiction of beef

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Wordman21 says:

Wow reminds me of a past relationship..Great Write

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