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lightness in the dark
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Let Me In:

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 Please open your heart and let me in,

I'm writing these delicate words, 

with a poets pen. I know you

must be afraid and worried about me,

But I promise not to treat you bad, just give

me some time and you will see.

I understand you've been hurt by other women,

But if you open up to me, you will see that I'm 

in to win it.

I know you must be confused on what to do,

Which is understandable,  but I'm not like most women

I wont misuse you.

I know you have doubts and may think all women are the

same, But if you give me a chance you will see im a grown women

who dont play games.

Broken, batterd,and betrayed your pride must be hurt,

I feel ashamed for the women who treated a good man like you

like dirt.

I know you are protective with your heart,

If you let me in maybe we can make a new start.

So I write these oh so delicate words to you with a

poets pen,

If you let me in, I can show you I can become your lover

and your friend.

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COMMENTS

 

Miss_chaniel says:

Warm words .... Nice !!!
 

SoFloetic says:

This is very relatable. I like this
 

royale jones says:

yes mama! soothing write for a battered heart! nice piece..
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tretre says:

Thank you, Royale,SoFloetic, andMiss_Chaniel...Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.. You all keep those pens movin!

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2b2b2 says:

Ahhh....Beautiful....thanks for sharing!

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