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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
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I gun for the sun
Why shoot the sun
Too many others are too busy
Shooting the moon
Though I go blind
I see later
Through a periscope
My ship sailed and sunk
Down below
Where fish don’t go
Bottomed out
Drifting like wood
Up a creek
I see cracks in the moon
It’s about to crumble
Like a cookie
In the layers of the ozone
Highly concentrated
Rusty brown
Pale blue molecules

 

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