Rhone | Poetry Vibe
Rhone
This poet practices good karma and posts comments 6400
contest winner
THE ENVISION OF MY MIND. WRITING IS AN INSIGHT TOWARDS MY SOUL. I JUST WANT SHARE IT WITH THE WORLD

Site Rank

GENERAL

  4 star general
Total poems   169
Lifetime Views   32770
Total poems - 7 days   0
Total poems - 30 days   0
Total poems - 90 days   0
Total poems - 365 days   0
you need to login or register to leave a comment

Give Me A Love I Can See

CATEGORY

romance

Views: 219

I need a love I can see, not camelflaged by the art of loving to be decieved, by what it is to the belief, this is the love to recieve, show by action since its louder than words, describe by the pictures and the scriptures, so our love can grow richer, maybe I want a little of affection that leaves other second guessing and here's the message, that have other's lower your lesson, I've reckon that the only one above the stars is you and heaven, so the stars can look upon you, the truth is me with you

The tip of the lips, memorized by the sway of your hips, the kisses, the smell of fragrance, enhance, to advance, the chart of the heart, with so much knowledge, to have known at the start, never divided, not apart, together, as one, the heart, to fill its viod, no more lonely rapture, looking with my eyes, love I have to capture, device a plan, to stand, on my feet, not leave behind, we both is in our prime, that successful nature of the world with all its pleasure to get better with time, we have to sign the dotted line, to compromise the art of affection, then we can use a positive aggression, like an instant message

The success of love, that I was blessed from above, seemingly, that I'm living a dream, some forms of reality, can't be free, if this feeling is not with me, searching, for a soul, in comparision with my mine, time to find, a stable, capable, state of mind, someone who belongs, with the emotional heart of mine, combine with inner emotions, the chosen of the purpose, a love instead of lust is what I want to purchase, No, I'm not trying to make anybody nervous, but this what it was ment for me, the prophet chosen not to see, but the cause of my belief hoping it don't affect you towards me

Let me be the one to say I love you, the one with a smile that will light up a room with no lights, my heart have its rights, keeping faith, so when the sun can shine through, my dark nights, peace because I don't have the hands to fight, give me that someone, who have a gift of conversation, communitcation, to know what to say throughout the relationship, that equipt with the time of laughter and know when to cry, the truth as oppose to a lie, bravery when I'm shy, can water the grass when its dry, searching as I try

Find me a love I can see, the love I can dream, so my soul can fly free, the legend of my story, is missing one peace, I want to teach, that my passion, is too much to say in this speech, the stars I want to reach, can I preach to you, about my love, flying through, I'm a damned to comprehend, she will become my best friend, so she will understand my faults as well as my strengths, our relationship can go the length, the other is repent, she's sort of like a dove, the varies ways of love

You must be registered to leave a comment. Registration is FREE.

Register

COMMENTS

Contest Winner  

The Immortal Wize says:

Awesome!

login below

Forgot your username?