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"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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The Beast Inside Me:

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 Like a tornado ripping through your city,

I'm ready to spin out of control, ready for all

to see me,

the beast that lives within me...

locked up, caged up, time after time feeling fed up,

time to let out my beast, giving you all a close up.

Outraged, ready to rip from my body, ready to 

take on anybody.

Breathing heavely... trying hard to keep it steady,

 ready to takle my pad, 

my pen now shaped like a machete, a downward

slice,leave words in the air like confetti, words fall down hard, 

in perfect form, so good the page had to be 

 ripped off like a beheading.

 dazed and confused my heart beat increased,

I'm ready for the beast inside me to be released.

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COMMENTS

 

scash102 says:

Alright, alright, alriiight. I like this.

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cwinstead319 says:

OMG! LUV THIS! WELL WRITTEN!

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The Immortal Wize says:

That's it right there tretre ink poisoning.

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2b2b2 says:

Fantastic Flow tretre....you went in...Love It....ONE

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