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Rhone
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THE ENVISION OF MY MIND. WRITING IS AN INSIGHT TOWARDS MY SOUL. I JUST WANT SHARE IT WITH THE WORLD

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AND SO I FAIL

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I failed in the opposite of success, the matter which we never tested the quest of knowldge that regardless of the conflict that we might achieve to recieve what we accomplish the foreign wish, the light hits a switch and we stumble and fall, the thought of standing tall, when we hear satan calls, compromise to define meaning, dreaming of the art of success but don't inform a personal plan

And so I fail, for the after thought that's among us that cannot tell, the rebel sat sail, the ship have sanken and the world took the tank with the sin, beginning with the end, into the part we see through religion as it baffled our eyes with lies, children cries as there peers dies, are you surprise that this is the money making for the media to take hold and create a situation for the depressed

And I failed, so I can confess, if you can't give the world knowldge or something positive than shut the *** up, because that pen is mightier than the sword, emotion hurts worst than physical, this is the words that can from the mental, the appeal of foreign desires, to set this world unto fire, hell will this ship set sail, hard to tell and its hard to find, positive through all this negative

And I failed, at this physical techique for these thoughts having my mental asleep, we reap benefits off this world's pain, the morgue gets paid off the family that have gotten slain, a world born into in emotional drain, so we do the same thing expecting different result, is that insane, the train of positive vibe's only come so often, the children are spoiled rotton that they next home is in the coffin

And So I Failed, you may ask why, do i desire to try, to inform the thoughts that compromise the then and now without telling a lie, that when I die, I don't have nothing for the next generations to learn from, that I'm just a waste of life, regardless of the attitude that I might accomplish of becoming a fool, but life's experiences taught me more then any college will do, so I share to the world whatever that thought can prove, BUT

AND SO I FAILED

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2b2b2 says:

AWESOME....you nail this Brother Rhone.....Keep On Expressin', heads are catching on....ONE

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