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Too Fast

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The wheels on the cars go round,

And round,

And my breathing rhythm goes out of control,

Heart panicing twice as bad as before,

Thoughts freezing all at once,

All because of the wheels,

Spinning rapidly in a 360 degree motion,

Because my mind couldn't handle something that fast,

If that's bad enough,

Then what's worse?

What else can't I handle?...

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The Immortal Wize says:

this reads like a zoom.

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