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sonofsun5211
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Peel Back My Layers

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Peel back my layers

Peer into my vastness

Down into my deep

Darkness oblivious to light

Using your second sight

Souls weep

Bound by crassness

You can tell from our prayers

The game and all it's players

The passers and their passes

Right by those who creep

With the most insight

Bragging isn't like

those who enlight each

Of us by the masses

And can heal our tares

Peel back my layers

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tretre says:

I really like this poem. I thought this poem was deep. I will be following your work. Welcome to the vibe :). Keep that pen movin!
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The Immortal Wize says:

Same here, you've gained another fan. Keep on Flowin

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