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life 2 min read 696 views Jun 15, 2014

A dream come true!

Shall I, shan't i, shall I, shan't i?

Oh I don't know,

20 minutes over the send button,

Seemed easy an hour ago,

I've been dreaming of this moment for 8 long months,

What if she's lost interest in me?

But I really could do with one of those hugs!

I guess I'm not sure if I wanna kill my dreams,

*** it, here we go send send send.....

At least now I'll have an answer to if we're only friends,

I know I'm capable of making my dreams come true,

But man this girl is one that who...

Captures your whole soul in a split second glance,

When she kisses you, easily, you slip into a trance,

Years ago I'd see her, couldn't help but watch her dance,

I was sold that night I shared with her, all intensity enhanced.

Has a mind that can inspire you, educate subconsciously,

Only concerned with the way her mouth moves, speaking words so beautifully,

Try to keep my eyes with hers even with wonder impulsing,

If I let myself go I could end up convulsing,

Not that I would mind that....ahem....anyway....

So I sit here waiting patient as time ticks away,

Oh my days, there's a buzzing....***! What's it gonna say......?

Yeah!!!!!! She said yes....

The words cleverly chosen, must have impressed,

I can't believe it, dreams really do come true,

And my god I can't wait to get my hands on you,

Dancing on the bed, singing in the bath,

Everything around me, seems to make me laugh,

Hoorah, all the mind power eventually paid off,

I'm so thankful that 'The Secret' was finally unlocked!

Now for my next trick, let's see if this works again,

So thankful for this day universe,

I'ma carry on believing!!

Majestic-Anon-Creedy

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