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catmartan
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lightness in the dark

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At a stand still

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life

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Your feet move

you stand still

walking going nowhere

no direction you have

taking the same steps

feet pounding the slab

you haven't went

you can't go

want listen

think you know

that's not a good look

but who am I

am just a onlooker.

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Contest Winner  

2b2b2 says:

Great capture....well played....ONE
 

scash102 says:

Sounds like stubbornness, definitely get The image
 

catmartan says:

Yes ! Thanks to the both of you !

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