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life 1 min read 647 views Sep 11, 2014

The forever quest

In a moment of extasy he plunges deep into her atlantis

In hopes to find remains of a lost civilization of her past

Wondering what they felt once upon a time between her thighs

Searching slowly making sure he wouldnt miss a stroke by swimming too fast

In 90 degree weather hes as cold as antartica

Only showing emotion when hes strokin warmed by the flesh of a woman

A feeling so good he couldnt notice the pain

In his chest, with no regrets..he expects good sex to numb it

First kiss to her lips, imagining hes kissed her millions of times before

And that he wakes up in her arms every morning

Hoping to see his soul in an assortment of eyes..but never sees nothing

So on his heart layers of ice begins forming

He climaxes his frustration Releasing sweet moans and whimpers

His pride wont let him cry, so he ejaculates his demise in her open mouth

Then rolling over holding her close wondering if this one would mean forever

Or when (if ever) his forever would be found

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The Immortal Wize

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2b2b2

Damn......Fffiyah! Some mind you got there...thanks for sharing!

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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