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Dear Love

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romance

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No need for introductions
We meet in the past
It was always brief
Your presents never last
So fast how you left me so trashed
Now, my task is to try to avoid you
Like a student skipping class
Contrast, when you were here
You made me feel like you were here at last

So love,
Why do you insist on treating me this way?
Cause like old ruins you leave me in decay
Okay...
I'll admit I had a part in this play
But all I wanted was for you to stay
With me, so I can enjoy you while you please
My wants and needs
Love, can you just be upfront
For once
Can you be straight forward and blunt?
Cause the hunt for you left me distressed for months

And Love,
Why all the different phases
Same situation, so many different faces
Frustration, because I wanna feel your every sensation
Patience, good things will come if you’re waiting
Like visitation, I pause every time something good comes
Slight hesitation
Concentration... gotta keep my eyes on the prize
Like compensation
Relations?... Relations!
I messed with you love simply because of temptation
Waiting for you to make a point like a statement
Cause you’re the Consolation to my surprise... amazement

Now love,
What’s really good with all these contusions?
Talking to you when your not there like an illusion
So much confusion, so much damage that you’re instating
Pollution clouding the body and the mind
Devine power triggering cold chills down my spine
Decline me! Never that
Just pick up and accept these charges
I see you’re the captain of this ship
Well can I speak to the sergeant?
Pardon...
But without you, my heart seems to harden
I can only fertilized the soil,
You have to plant some seeds the garden

Well love,
I can say until that day
I will be lost without you
Traveling alone and astray

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COMMENTS

 

paulaskid says:

Nice Bra

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God

 

DallasCowgirl says:

Wow. Wow. Wow. You write like a Lyracalist! Felt like I was reading a rap

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kingqadardwon' says:

Nice flow
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Lovelylady1 says:

Felt your frustration... Good ink my king

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BlueDichotomy says:

I agree with @UnderHisWings7 lyricism on point. Very nice

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Xclusive says:

Thank you everyone on the feed back.

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LP45 says:

Talk about an explosion of emotion! The wordplay is excellent. Definitely an "xclusive" write. Keep writing and thank you for sharing.
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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