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life 2 min read 487 views Jan 18, 2015

Mr. Monroe(can you tell I'm angry)

you made me love you   you were so damn picky too you  wouldnt leave me the *** alone so i gave in  thinking this would  be   a good thing  for  me gain a friend in th eprocess i  oromised myself i would not fall in love but  gues what my stupiddid ......

any gueses? no? i fell in love  i fell head over eals  for  an like you you selfish sun of  a ***ing you manipulated me into thinking you loved me   made me fall in love and  thenn gave me nothing but how dare you intrude like you did allow me  to fall knowing  damn well you were never intending on loving me 

then you have the never to make me seem like  a bad  person mutha***a your the  bad ***ing person  i ***ing hate the fact that my patheticcant let go ihate that  my  self worth is  so ***ed  up that i feel like i cant do any ***ing  beter  im sick of you and  your    turning things around  on me to take  the  attention of  your damn ***ing self so   do me a ***ing favor  Mr. Monroe go the *** away

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