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life 2 min read 515 views Jan 22, 2015

haunt(bastille inspired poem)

i'll come back to haunt you

memories  will taunt you

i will try to love you

not like i'm above you

as  i look into the sky  this song plays this song

plays  reminding me of those  days of solice 

ripped a way that night  you came to play

stripping me of my innocence in the most

unbearable way then that blazing  chorus plays

i'll come back to haunt you

memories will taunt you

oh yes they taunt  my every move visions 

of you teasing my existance  ***ing

with my mind  pushing me to and  from the brink

of insanity

i will try to love you

 this cluster *** of  emotions  every time you told me you

loveed me  i believed every punch and thrust was becasue you

feeling like because i believed you hurting me was love

not like i'm above you

above me on top of me  everytime i turn around

you're there imposing on my mental health ugh

you're everywhere i am  and  that's what haunts me

tenyour face shows up inmy mind  with the smile of the devil  singin that damn song

i'll come back to haunt you

memoreis will taunt you

i will try to love you

not like im  above you

 

 

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