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life 1 min read 453 views Jan 22, 2015

everything too much

i wear my heart  on my sleeve like

a badge of honor knowing

that it had holes in it  although i

always try not to love too much, care too much,

open my heart too much  there is always that oneperson

that makes you do everything too much

and that person  for me is you catching me at

my most vulnerable moment making me  feel like i've finally done it

found somebody  who loves me for me

you see the problem with doing everything too much is that your

the only one doing too much  most times waht you do for that person and what you want from that  person in return never gets reciprocated

intentions are blurred , thigns get left unsaid, and somebody (me) usually end up getting hurt 

so be fore i fall to hard im goin to  try my hardest not ot do everything to much

 

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