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just different 2 min read 496 views Sep 13, 2015

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the moment my pen met paper it became evident that my passion was unleashed a lost soul in need of a sweet release likre loosing my virginity for the first time a poetic orgasm filled with twiists and turn the climax was greater then any physical  intimate experience  from conception to birth thoughts untamed was born a force to be reconed with and it all started  the moment my pen hit paper

 

what a sweet day it was filled with poetic senius and poetic insanity a safe haven i bust my poetic nut and release all the emotion inside og me god yes it feels so good orgasm after orgasm poetic one poetic masterpiece after another the moment my pen met paper my life changed my eyes open and the world from my ***ed up perspective became a little more clearer 

 

so i beg it to go deeper take me alls dep into my talent drive me to the edge of euphoric bliss harder hader slam me up against the wall and make my poetic gennius cum the moment my pen met paper i knew i had  awaked a beast much greater then myself and the world will soon know my name allow me to introduce myself my name is untamed
 

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