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just different 2 min read 516 views Jan 22, 2015

insanity reigns

everywhere i turn  there is  chaos scrambling to find a way out i am trapped lost in a slew of   distructive aggression i am lost in the confines  of  my mind  no  one  can get  me out once i am in this insanity state the scariest place to be   where i am  forever lost and no one can find me

scared my life flashes before my eyes  and endless  sea of  *** ups and  misfires   my screams become  shrieks  of terror as i razor blade away the visions of  death but nothing seems  to help the contant  movie forever replaying in my head  MAKE THIS   STOP  i scream into the black abis of my mind  but the visions get  worse  more  graphic  as i am forced to wonder how i fell so far from grace my mind  is  a mad house and i can't get away

searching for  a safe place to rest my head i find  nothing so i cut a little deaper hoping that the pool of blood  im sitting in will  wash away this  constant  state of  dread  or maybe  it will   end my life completely i csnt take this much longer i go where most people fear too tread will you do me a favor  and  save me   the confines of my head

 

 

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2b2b2

Poignant portrait of torment....thanks for sharing.....ONE

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jsmorris

thanks hon

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DallasCowgirl

Very real!

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jsmorris

thanks guys for reading my work haven't been n here in a minute got fresh ink for ya'll stay tuned

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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