“This latest poem - I am just not sure -the message is sound but it starts a bit odd - ah who am I kidding I am eccentric ”
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I open my eyes
I cry inside
helpless to the viciousness ,I see before my eyes
Give Love and hope , wherever I can
The need great
I Am On Demand
drenched in blood ,from the warriors stand
falling with my heart in hand
Never Give Up
I shout to grief and pain
As I break apart
leaving my heart
to stand invain
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Emotional read. Left me wanting more. thanks for sharing it Kavindra.
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Thanks !! perhaps if you are wanting more you could write your own version of this piece . I have no doubt it will be a great read. Sometimes other poems inspire me to write , currently working on a piece based off a song oddly trying to make a country song into hip hop rap or something not sure . just thought it would be interesting to see how it looks . Remember your mind has no limits. keep writing!
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