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HymnAgen
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Pen wouldn't move til now Current eventz got me feelin some kinda way

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…She asked, “Why?” so I lied.

I gripped her hand

a little tighter,

Slipped from my position

to the seat cushion beside her

and explained,

“To make a mental monument

to your name –

in perpetuity, rewind it

and replay it, yet again,

in those moments

when I feel my lasts

are rapidly approaching,

vainly hoping to retain

it once my eyes no longer open.”

She radiantly smiled

with her eyes and with her lips,

traced the outline of my face

most tenderly with fingertips,

marched me over to the stairs

with the swaying of her hips

from whence the two of us

ascended into bliss

to cultivate

forget-me-nots…

 

- HymnAgen

 

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LP45 says:

Very nice write hymnagen. Thanks for sharing.

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2b2b2 says:

Suave Play.....Bravo....thanks for sharing!
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hymnagen says:

Ladypoet45, 2b2b2 Thanks for the reads

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DallasCowgirl says:

Always loving the imagery you bring to your pieces, whether short or long.

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hymnagen says:

I see you've been binge-ing...LOL! Real talk, sis. That a writer of your caliber digs my work that way is the greatest encouragement. Thank you!

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lasi_gi says:

This made me chuckle.

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