When we chat
it’s like the early days
come flooding back
in tidal waves
to drag me
into open seas
of emotions –
adrift
in the ocean breeze
of her familiar voice.
I wade
when we chat
like I did
in those earlier days.
- HymnAgen
HymnAgen
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CATEGORY
romance
When we chat
it’s like the early days
come flooding back
in tidal waves
to drag me
into open seas
of emotions –
adrift
in the ocean breeze
of her familiar voice.
I wade
when we chat
like I did
in those earlier days.
- HymnAgen
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COMMENTS
LP45 says: Great word play hymnagen, a great read too. Thank you for sharing this. |
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The Immortal Wize says: Lovely flow! So good to see you back and I do hope all is well. |
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RonnieL says: Know how you feel...been there before my brother. Heart felt write. Feelin it! |
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Corey says: I am truly feeling this. I've been missing someone and your words caused soul-moving memories. Beautiful, thank you! |
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hymnagen says: Thanks one and all for your time and kind words. @Wize Dom: Everything is good. Many irons in different fires making my writing sporadic, but I can't stop - this soothes my soul! |
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JustOneStoryTeller says: You have a way with words another nice write |
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hymnagen says: JustOneStoryTeller, thank you for your kind words |
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