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"A MOTHER'S WEAKNESS TO STRENGTH"

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A MOTHER'S WEAKNESS TO....

STRENGTH

"PAIN IS WEAKNESS LEAVING THE BODY".... A NOBLE QUOTE - TURNING YOUR GREATEST WEAKNESS INTO UNFORESEEN POWER, INTO GUIDANCE OF THE SOUL..

ON MY KNEES I SUBMIT, OPEN, WILLING TO SACRIFICE THIS WEAKNESS FOR A STRONGER ME....

I YIELD AS I RISE, SOMETHING ISN'T RIGHT, MY ANKLES ARE COLLAPSING, MY KNEES BUCKLE BENEATH ME, MY GUT BUBBLES WITH DOUBT, LUNGS DROWN IN FEAR. NO HEARTBEAT, JUST A TWITCH OF DEFEAT MY MIND ALLOWS MY SOUL TO BELIEVE.

THIS ISN'T PAIN, LOU GEHRIG'S SEEMS MORE FAMILIAR, TOTAL SHUT DOWN, WITH ONLY THE TRUEST OF LOVE REVEALED WITH EVERY LETHARGIC MEMBER CRAVING TO HEAL.

RESCUE ME, NEVER FEEL YOU COULD BURDEN A MOTHER'S TOWER, IN WHICH THE LOVE OF HER CHILDREN'S FAITH GLEAM IN SHINING ARMOR.

THEIR HEARTS CAVALRY WITH SUCH SERENE FOR ME, AS I BOW IN SORROW AND TRAIN MY ANGER TO LEAN. MY LOVE OF KNIGHTS I DON'T REGRET BECAUSE IT BORE ME THEE, BUT THIS CEREBRAL IMPULSE INJECTED ME WITH DOUBT, PULSATING ARTERIAL FEAR OF THEIR PARTING FROM ME.

WAS IT RIGHT TO REVEAL THIS PAIN BEFORE ME, RAGE, FORSAKING MY LIPS FOR ITS ABUNDANCE IN SPEECH, CRUCIFYING MY HEART'S PROMISE TO BE CORDIAL AND SERENE IN THE TIME OF ITS WEAKEST PEAK. CONSEQUENCES, I FALL INTO. REFLECTING ON THIS PARALYZED EXISTENCE, PAIN-DECEPTION FORMS IN ME HUMILITY, HE KIND WRITTEN WITH EMBARRASSMENT, BUT THE KIND CREATED IN SCROLLS....

SCROLLS, WRITTEN TO PRODUCE PAIN FROM STRENGTH, SHOWING ITS TRUE WEAKNESS AS YOUR POWER REVEALS THE STRENGTH TO CREATE WHAT IT WILLS TO DESTROY.

"PAIN IS WEAKNESS LEAVING THE BODY"....

PAIN, DESTINED FROM CREATION FOR STRENGTH TO DOOM ITS INTERNAL WEAKNESS IN EXTERNAL PENETRATION.

 

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latin_lover says:

This is deep on another level. Excellent write.

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Coloured_Asian says:

Now this is a soul wrenching pen all mothers can understand thanks for a great read

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HumbleMeeksInFloetry4 says:

I Humbly Thank and Appreciate You Both for taking the time to read my flow and give feedback, your opinions are cherished.
 

amin901 says:

I realy enjoy your work

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HumbleMeeksInFloetry4 says:

I TRULY AM THANKFUL AND HUMBLY APPRECIATE YOU ALL TAKING THE TIME TO READ MY WORK AND EXPOUND ON WHAT YOU RECEIVE FROM IT, WE ALL HAVE THIS GIFT OF FLOETRY FROM GOD AND I OFFER A MILLION TIMES MORE STRONGER PROPS TO THE FLOETRY YOU ALL PRODUCE OVER MY OWN! YOU ALL INSPRIRE ME AND I THANK YOU :-)
 

underhiswings7 says:

WOW! Just beautiful, sis!
 

HumbleMeeksInFloetry4 says:

Thank you so so much, I Humbly Appreciate that Sis!

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