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planet earth

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just different

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i look up to a black universe
then down at dirty bare feet
there must be nothing worse
than feelin the darkness inside of me
i didn't think much of it at first
but I soon was thinkin constantly
cause the sun shines down on earth
and I am too blinded to even see
my entire beings immersed
in shadows of some fantasy
so with the emptiness I converse
and in my pain i conceive
and in this pain i give birth
to all i know and believe
like how each grain of sand and dirt
is also a part of me-when i sweat or bleed
there's no quenching my thirst
i have just enough of what l need
and no more-poverty in the multiverse
is strange as dark dawns-as bittersweet
as my struggle-heavens curse
incarnation-a facade of mortality
whats real will never die or disperse
but i'm clearly in the wrong galaxy 

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Charles2 says:

looking between dimensions, your expressions are vivid. would love to see how you express yourself under the influence of happiness. drunk on love without the hangover. like your skill at expressing yourself.
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hymnagen says:

You are, indeed, gifted. Your painful outpourings are lovely reads.

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