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make believe

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thank god for this spring
I thought the cold had laid claim
to everything seasons bring
to who it is i became..
when I look back on things
what i see isn't the same
as I remember it seeming then
back when you knew my first name
that which you'll never know again
thank god the sun finally came
so i can say amen
cause i cant let my sun shine in vain
down on ghosts and deadmen
who speak without having brains
and never know when
to stop playing their games
or even take ten
enjoy assigning blame
and talkin that same you've been
cause i'm on a whole other plane
that you can't even comprehend
but still, the truth won't change
no matter how hard you pretend

 

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Charles2 says:

great word play, story line and timing. nice change of season, too

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fm110comphodent says:

Plain and intelligent wrath of determination. The look up in the season evolved the brains to plunder the storyline towards change of having being told

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