“Losing to win again”

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romance 1 min read 721 views Oct 29, 2015

And then there was you part II

The thing about it is I never thought the devil could be so beautiful. I always expected him to look like a ol' hag with horns and hooves.. and then there was you.... When I think about love, I continue on thinking about pain. It’s like seeing the black clouds but ignoring the rain. How did I become so confused? Why didn't I see the side of effects of you? How to catch a murderer? Easy, you just have to think like one. How to catch a heartbreaker? Simple, just fall in love with one. But then there was you. A hologram of everything I ever wanted. For a moment, you almost had me thinking that your touch was real. Just to open my eyes to see, I'm the only one here. Left with flashes, of memories of you. Leading me to write poems called "And then there was you part II" And a new attitude that has to be excused. Lesson learned but you can NOT make a man love you. but its okay... -ICanSeeNow.

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bluejay

I love this, your words are amazing!

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ICanSeeNow

Thnx!!

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DallasCowgirl

Very heartfelt! You'll look back on this piece and remember how far you came. Keep writing.

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love_supreme

Very nice

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