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Suicide Note

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This vibe reminds me of "You"

Like a movie - rerun in my head 

Just to be next to you.

Like a chicken with no head, 

I’d still run to you.

Gender part less

I’d play whitney - regardless

bodyguard-less

I’d run to you.

But would you stay? 

Would my wounds from YOUR tongue make you run away?

It’s not your fault BUT

Would you blame me 

if I asked you to stay? 

 

Convoluted visions of love I share with you.

Although you never asked me to

Looking in your eyes is too much 

I turn my back to you 

just to ask of you 

To love me…

 

The reminders of how much I don’t need you 

Doesn’t give much relief to the weight of my plea…

But like Pink

I ask that you don’t leave

Like Sam Smith - stay with me

I know I can be like a pill sometimes

instead of making you better…

And it makes me sick to my stomach

Letting go of our forever

But still…

 

Something like a sales pitch

I’ll fight for you - Samson

Until you give into me.

Tell me your secrets

I’m not the Pharisees

Nothing like Delilah 

Yo soy Rameses 

Break the laws of love for you boy

Anna-Lise

Our problems simply can’t compete.


So

Whole heartedly

Undeniably 

Unapologetically.

Choose me

I want you 

but I have to love me.

-ICSN

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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mlowe5 says:

I feel you, IcanSeenow. It took me back a couple of decades ago when we opened the front door and saw him hanging from his bedroom door. Love is Love. Lived. In the end, God reveals all; and we grow forward in His healing grace. Great share. Thanks. ONE. Peaxce and Love.
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Icanseenow says:

Thanks I appreciate it!

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