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romance 2 min read 420 views Dec 6, 2015

You...

You...
I noticed you ...
I noticed you were hurt and broken down ,you didn't smile so much and as you vented and vented to the open you still manage to keep a frown. 
I offered myself to you , I wanted you to see someone's cares , I wanted you to see you're not the only one who's dealt with things , you can confide in me and share...
Share with me your worst days and your bad days , your worst memories and your bad memories 
Share with me your cries and your laughters. 
You 
You couldn't quite understand that I was only trying to be your friend , you only assumed I was trying to be more ... M..more ..  
We began to speak more 
We began to text more 
You ..
You began to smile more, and laugh a lot more too 
After while whenever u smiled I smiled 
Whenever you laughed I laughed 
Whenever you shared I shared 
It was actually a little too much for me to bare. 
I begin to realize as I'm trying to cure you ..  I'm coming down with something ..
Something like whenever you called my stomach knotted up a little 
Or whenever u looked at me I couldn't help but look the other way , better yet when you smile my eyes light up and my heart melts. 
I was trying to give you a cure ,
And You were giving me a dose of YOU!
You , I thought I was coming down with something , but I was only gaining feelings for you. 
My constant smiling 
My continuous giggling 
My unnecessary blushing 
It wasn't me it was you.
You've given me something that I don't want to get rid of...
If this was to all end and disappear my only cure would be ..
You...   

 

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love_supreme

This is very nice. Excellent write.

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The Immortal Wize

I love the the poem and your style is fierce.

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amin901

Like the way you expressed it.Nicely put

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