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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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her speech is broken

she's not clearly spoken

her jaws are wired shut

he tried to shut her up

she's still living

she's still talking

she's still walking

the bullet went in and left

her body

thinking she was dead

he raised his arm

putting one in his head

I never imagined so much red

not even on Valentines day

she's a rose with a broken stem

and a few broken limbs

reaching out to touch the hem

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xclusive says:

Nice write. Well put together. Keep it coming

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