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he's not even that cute

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He’s not even that cute,

Ignoring my texts and calls

Slowly letting down my painfully built walls

Thinking, contemplating if I want this

Casual conversation, no shared information

Untold stories, lies. Why

He’s not even that cute

Yea nice body, funny personality

But all of it becomes ugly

When you try to just win

The prize of course

Not much work to put forth

When you’re drunk,

Music, Laughs, late night

takes a turn for the worst.

Everything’s a blur,

Awaken, late hour tasting bourbon on my tongue

Confused, I felt you, am I sure?

Short conversation questions asked

Answers that can’t be explained, did I feel you?

Asking myself these questions

The aftertaste of bourbon, unanswered questions.

My next attempt, get to know him better,

He shares no effort, doesn’t care

Accepting this overnight affair,

I need it, Text sent

I take a drive for my next attempt,

Rain falls, heart palpitates

I’m nervous, I want this, My thighs are moistened,

I lick my lips, I can just taste it.

One thing leads to another,

I pull down my panties, he’s undressed ,touching me

I’m wet….

Slides in deep, can barely speak…speechless,

I reminisce I start to think

No wonder I couldn’t remember look at the size of this thing,

Disappointment fills the air, silently I stare

But think to myself, why do I even care

He’s not even that cute!

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The Immortal Wize says:

Nice! !!
 

social seer says:

Thumbs up! A catchy read!
 

RonnieL says:

Like it! Keeping it real...great visual.

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Woven says:

His arrogance is the only thing on display, nothing there to cherish. Enjoyed your expression.
 

SMusinga says:

Aww. this poem was so sweet. I loved the descriptions. It was a very well written poem.

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