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Rear View Slay

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Time to slay the alphabet a bit
Concentrating on the right border
Writing a peace piece to uplift the spirit
Ending each line in alphabetical order

More rainy days than sunny days, and it's way past April 
Like the weather isn't sure how it's supposed to be
Me and the weather, we've got something in common
Shrugging shoulders slighting bright days for dreary
 
Life's uncertainty has left me ill at ease
Not sure of how to feel
I try to look behind the clouds to gaze
at the sun, but the rays are too veiled to heal
 
Gray skies cause dreary days to idle
Will showers sorely saturate July?
June behaved like sunshine was a secret to be kept
Will this month further prove that summer is a lie?
 
Disappointed, I decided to set my sights upon the moon
It's muted light illuminated the night
A cosmic whisper spoke to me, saying, hush dear one
Unearth the peace within your core, and you'll overcome this plight
 
Sifting thru my dreams, those words became quintessential
I arose with the sun, finally feeling thoroughly rested
Unencumbered was my slumber
For the blessings of the universe are time tested
 
The peace I felt that morning, ultimately
Is the sunshine that exists beneath the vile
Conscious bliss such as this, is the way
not a shrouded entity hidden in an X-file
 
That peace shall be my want, my desire, for which I yen
Despite the storm, that peace will become my refuge, my Zen
 

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Corey says:

Hello Woven, first off, I love the title of your poem! The past few weeks there has been a lot going on around me and I'm glad I read this peace, piece that I can relate to souldeep! Great write! Thanks for sharing this!
 

RonnieL says:

Love the flow in this piece,,,the muted light illuminated the night. Love that caption. Keep pushing your emotions and pen.

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Kingqadardwon' says:

This is a masterpiece for real... One of the best pieces that I've ever read... I was looking for to each following line.. Amazing
 

Woven says:

Corey, if my words can help you in maintaining that peace, then it was a blessing to have shared them. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me!
 

Woven says:

Glad you loved the flow and that caption in particular Ronnie. I will try to keep the flow going, thank you!
 

Woven says:

Wow, Kingqadardwon', you humble me, as there are so many talented artists here, and you are definitely a gifted writer. Thanks a million!

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