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My Father's lessons

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My father taught me that 
I am not his mistakes 
That I should not try to be 
What he could not become 
Even though he sweats blood
And tears in order to provide
Me with 
The life that he could never achieve
I am not his shortcomings
Nor am a tool for him to reach
That goal 
That he failed to reach at his prime
I am not my father
Nor am I his sins
Even though his blood 
Runs through my veins 
And is pumped by this beating
Heart
I am not his sins 
So I shouldn't carry myself 
As if I am reaching 
For that distant star 
That he flew into orbit for 
But his thrusters failed 
To give him full throttle 
And he was just shy of reaching it
Now he simply floats in space
Being tossed into a blackhole
To ponder his failures and mistakes
I am not his second chance 
At tasting glory 
Nor his chance at crossing 
That finish line which aluded him 
I am the star in his eye 
Which he can reach and touch
I am his greatest achievement 
And his greatest motivation 
To give his all every single day 
So that I may have the chance
Of reaching my goals 
Without being inhibited 
By the trials that he had to face 
I am his love 
Cloned in flesh and blood  
I am his wisdom 
I am my father's son 
Not another version of him 
In which the flaws 
Of the pervious version 
Are polished and smoothed out 
I am my father's son 
But not a better version of him 
I am me 
And my father taught me to value 
Life and treat it as the gift it is 
 

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Woven says:

My goodness, such a powerful tribute to a wonderful dad, one who knows all about unconditional love, and showered you with his wisdom. Fabulous expression!

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poetunleashed says:

Woven thank you very much, the lessons we learn from our parents come in handy when we all grown up and facing our own struggles

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