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The opposites

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I use to understand these creatures but now I'm not so sure.. The most difficult  breed to try and get through too.. They think from the left hemisphere and we think from the right.. Constantly pulling against each other with every word spoken.. We're calm, they're turnt; they're relaxed, were wired; we push and they pull.. Seems like our drums never beat in sequence..  I swear at times I just wanna be free.. Free too live without the day to day companionship of these beast.. But the way we're built its impossible.. We need the communication from these unstable creatures in order to fill complete.. They provide more than what's above, just seems like they all tend to focus on the negative aspect of things.. In the beginning I feel so close to them, holding on to every word.. Months.. If not weeks later the feeling that was once warm, exciting and new is now replaced with feelings of pain, sorrow and confusion.. Why can't they just share what's on the dome? Why do we have to apply pressure and squeeze information out like a grape fruit? Honestly is what you say you want but you can't seem to provide us with the courtesy.. Instead you keep it bottled up inside...choosing to let it affect your thoughts, decisions and more importantly your actions.. How can we "choose" if you don't allow us to see you, know you and get to love you at your worse? Why can't we sit and discuss these things so we can understand one another better and build? that's all I really want. The same companionship I was willing to be done with is what I really long for.. But my compass seems to point north and yours south.. No one wants to be alone.. But how can you balance the scales to compromise? 

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The Immortal Wize says:

Very well said! Welcome to the Vibe.
 

xclusive says:

Dope write!
 

RonnieL says:

Deep piece. It's a work in progress at times, I guess the question asked is...is it worth working. I guess at times you have to go through many pieces of fruit to find the RIGHT one. just sayin

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mrmelody7 says:

Easily relate a poem to take to the Man Cave
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Real talk!

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