Told me u loved me &
Ran with my heart
Undid my clothes I gave u the best part
Together forever u said we'll be
Honesty loyalty is what you promised me.
Hours later
Unanswered ??? Are bothering me
Rumble in the sheets was all u gave me
Took my soul & told me lies
Set me up for my own demise he was H.I.V+.
blakkbeauty
 1900
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TRUTH HURTS
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The Immortal Wize says: WOW! This is a deep, short stack...Welcome to the Vibe. |
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LP45 says: Wow is right! Very deep and sad. Thanks for sharing. |
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after vision says: my poet, I pray that it's just your pen flow and not the doctors note. I love the energy of this |
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hymnagen says: This piece pierced my soul. Powerful testimony! |
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blakkbeauty says: This is nor my real life story although a family member of mines it is, I like to write rather my poem pertains to my personal life or life in general theres a story in everything. |
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lovelylady1 says: My beloved, I feel your overwhelming desire for story telling from another's perspective. To be in tune with others emotions and be able to speak for them in the form of pen and paper. Love it babe girl! |
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blakkbeauty says: Thank u |
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Poetic08' says: Very powerful Queen Black beauty |
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