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when i rise

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you spoke and your word 

cut through this space 

and accelerated its pace 

as it traveled from your lips 

and resonated in mind 

my mind mulled over 

this information it received

my sensory organs bled 

bled from the implication 

of what they perceived 

stunned by this 

tears began to flow 

uncontrollably they flowed

as my heart 

finally understood 

the messages 

my brain had communicated 

my heart erupted 

the heat filled my body 

i began to perspire 

as the heat made my body 

its final resting place 

like ash covering the slopes 

the pain covered my heart 

and hardened 

solidifying 

and creating a coat

around my sophacating heart 

the pressure it emmitted

fossilized the broken pieces 

which had began to fly 

as my heart crumbled 

however like a phoenix 

rising from the ashes 

i hope to rise stronger 

made better 

turned into a stranger 

that my past wouldn’t recognize

a better self whose heart 

is stronger to withstand 

the pressures that claim

they had previously broken it 

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