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Stolen Identity

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Like a thief you captured her attention

The trouble you were in you didn't mention..

Honesty holds no character upon your name..

Over a dinner date, you pondered her identity

Claiming your place Like a child with a play date..

It was unjust the way you scorn her thoughts..

Allowing such ignorance to become her truths

As she aged you made her apart of you...

 Standing before the mirror she had not recognized her own name

Being withheld over the years

 Bringing her family to tears..

The news hit the streets quick

Like a predator hungry for bait...

Her thoughts began to exceed her

All it took was one second

One moment

Pills in hand

With the bed made,

Letter signed...

Dear, Lord please forgive me.

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Contest Winner  

The Immortal Wize says:

Deeply touched!

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Xclusive says:

Man the ending had me in chills. Nicely delivered. Keep the ink flowing

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Trou8l3 says:

Thanks y'all I appreciate it

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